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Offline Alex Melusky

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Here it is.
« Reply #20 on: January 11, 2008, 02:39:49 AM »
   The street was silent as Bam and ez gracefully slid down the stair way. In a matter of seconds, they were in the subway.
 "I swear I saw them come down here," whispered Bam. "It seems like they disappeared." They both crouched low when they heard footsteps.
 "Over there!" ez yelled. They both turned and ran down the hallway.
    Seemingly out of nowhere, two men jumped in front of Bam and ez's field of vision,into the railway. A woman screamed and dropped her papers when she heard the train coming.
 A man yelled, "They're going to get hit!"
  Ez looked across the way. He saw the two other men standing there. One was wearing blue, the other was wearing black. The train screeched to a stop in front of them. A crowd of people got off the train, being replaced by the awaiting one. The woman picked up her papers and hurried in. Bam and ez immediatley jumped into the train. Bam ran left and ez ran right.
  All four men vaulted benches and people in their way. The man wearing blue jumped off the train just before the doors closed. Bam ran face first into the door. He fell backwards, yelling. "Damn! He got away," he said. A woman helped him up and gave him a tissue.
 "Oh my gosh! Are you alright?" she asked.
 "Yeah, I'm alright," mumbled Bam.
    Ez ran on top of the benches, balancing on the longer ones he encountered. When he got to the next car, he jumped of the benches. Little did he know that he was just tall enough to hit his head on the luggage rack.
 "Son of a b*tch!" he screamed. The man in blacked jumped out of the train when the door was closing. His foot got stuck in it but he managed to free it. By then, the train was moving. He limped down the hall and up the stairs.
 "Kerbie," the man in blue exclaimed,"What happened to your foot?"
 "Well Blue,"he began,"When I was getting off, the door closed on my foot."
 *laughing* "Ouch. We better get goin' to...." Beep! Beep! Beep! Beep! Alex Melusky woke up from his slumber and quickly turned off the alarm clock. "Why," talking to himself," does it always end when Blue says where they're going?" He stood up and got dressed. *sighs* "Time to get ready for school."
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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #21 on: January 11, 2008, 11:37:21 AM »
Ambisanchez anyone?


I don't expect many people to remember....
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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #22 on: January 11, 2008, 12:36:13 PM »
Ambisanchez anyone?


I don't expect many people to remember....

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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #23 on: January 11, 2008, 12:52:34 PM »
 ;D roofjumper***  :D


good start man. keep it coming.

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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #24 on: January 11, 2008, 01:23:56 PM »
What?!

you know what i'm talking about??

I know this guy does -> :-Sarcasm
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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #25 on: January 27, 2008, 04:01:52 PM »
Good start, i like it alot keep the good work coming. :)
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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #26 on: January 29, 2008, 03:02:57 AM »
the next part probably wont come out for awhile. i have a couple projects in school to do so those will take up my time...
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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #27 on: January 29, 2008, 02:43:07 PM »
Don't rush yourself, thats how mistakes happen.
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Re: Parkour Story (Story Now Started)
« Reply #28 on: March 06, 2008, 04:12:18 AM »
now that i have one project out of the way, i think i can squeeze in the end of the next part by the end of March. pressure with the big tests comin up, but ive been gettin them under my belt.
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