Nate,
We can't say your roll is right or wrong telepathically. It would be awesome if you could video capture yourself, and then post it, and we'd be happy to help you out. Or, if you tell us exactly where it hurts, we can help you problem solve. In the meantime, check out some Roll tutorials (check previous pages of this topic for plenty of choices) on youtube and see what you can figure out.
-Adam