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The loss of love The regain of movement
« on: December 28, 2009, 10:38:42 AM »
hey guys  I'm not  a posting type of guy but I like to think and this is what I came up with
it's just something I think every one can relate to hope you like it

The loss of love
              The regain of movement 


You were the power behind the movement, 
the focus in each step, the burning desire to 
keep moving ,the goal after every obstacle. 
But no more. The goal has now become an obstacle. 
Fear where did come from. 
Movement sloppy  uncertainties are prevalent, 
focus is scattered and the burning desire is only a ember now. 
It's texture curves once very familiar 
now seem rough colder and distant. 
Breathe focus. 
Movement cannot be lost only adapted. 
The burn of desire is now the burn of determination. 
I cannot hate this obstacle 
I have loved it I will always love it 
but I will conquer it......   
Go !!! 
The approach is scary. 
Breathe!!!!  
steps more focused...... 
movement steady.... 
power flowing determination raging.... 
The time is now the goal is unclear but the results must stay the same........... 
Goodbye beloved obstacle It's time to move to the next,  our paths shall cross again...
Our movement may have been brief 
but I will remember it forever.... 
new movement new obstacles new goals MY path and I must stay true to it....

Jar[RELL] Jones
"Stay true to your path"


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Re: The loss of love The regain of movement
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2009, 11:30:58 AM »
Thats really good man, thank you! :)
In memory of Andrew. Rest in peace, fellow traceur.

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Re: The loss of love The regain of movement
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2009, 05:12:02 PM »
*snapping* very nice :D
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Re: The loss of love The regain of movement
« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2009, 05:43:14 PM »
Thanks guys It means alot
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Re: The loss of love The regain of movement
« Reply #4 on: December 28, 2009, 06:47:27 PM »
Very nice. I enjoyed it very much. :) Love the title by the way.
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