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« on: April 30, 2008, 10:39:30 PM » |
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Seems to be some talent here in Indiana with some poetry. So go ahead and share. I would love to read. =D
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"If you enter this world knowing you are loved and you leave this world knowing the same, then everything that happens in between can be dealt with. " -Michael Jackson
"Those who do not want to imitate anything, produce nothing." -Salvador Dali
...wanna run?
Text me! or call.
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brewer.kyle
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Awww yea!
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« Reply #1 on: May 20, 2008, 09:12:56 AM » |
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Water is my element.
It flows over land, as do I.
No obstacle too high or too narrow.
No destination too far.
No end, only checkpoints.
Flaws are being removed.
Soon it will all be one motion.
Motion is my weapon,
My arsenal is expanding,
When the day is done,
I know it's just the beginning.
Thought I'd start this off since it never really... started.
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Cut Hands.
Scraped Forearms and Elbows.
Head is Pounding.
Heart is Racing.
Knees barely bend at the end of the day.
We start again tomorrow, Traceur.
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(t)Rainer
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« Reply #2 on: May 20, 2008, 01:00:12 PM » |
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That is pretty dope, we did these random poetry things in class, I will type some of them up when I get them back. THey aren't that good, but good for what I had to work with  |
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"If you enter this world knowing you are loved and you leave this world knowing the same, then everything that happens in between can be dealt with. " -Michael Jackson
"Those who do not want to imitate anything, produce nothing." -Salvador Dali
...wanna run?
Text me! or call.
765-977-7613
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b_ran_runner
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« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2008, 04:28:37 PM » |
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vrai
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« Reply #4 on: July 22, 2008, 11:46:51 AM » |
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does it have to be realted to pk? cuz i have 2 poems not related at all, but they got published!  |
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unknownz24
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« Reply #5 on: September 08, 2008, 09:55:51 PM » |
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Even though this thread hasn't been touched lately, I'll still add something to it and hopefully you guys can give me some good feedback.
Bricks and Angels
A primal rhythm of breathing and footfalls echo in his ears as the crisp air is cut by his conditioned form.
Focused, tranquil.
Rigid Monsters of the cityscape which stand mocking in the face of others yield to the grace of his motions.
Detours for some yet shortcuts for him. Obstacles his opportunities.
Hardened hands impact abrasive concrete as legs forcefully release the Earth, soaring over the mortar chasm.
Time slows to a crawl as he lingers in the sky.
Silent. Weightless. Frozen. The wind rushes to catch up.
Nature’s laws pull his rubber soled feet back to the unforgiving pavement and his body fluidly conforms as water to disperse the crushing grip of gravity.
Without hesitation his journey continues with a clear mind as the world blurs past, finding angels within the demons of his landscape.
Input, good or bad, the more useful the better though. Thanks!
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Bret [Soundcrafter]
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« Reply #6 on: September 14, 2008, 07:08:54 PM » |
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Nawt PK-related:
"Cellblock 62"
Don’t let your hands rest for too
Long not so much before you turn to dust
Then what? Hate to say I told you so
Practice makes perfect when are
You gonna learn you’re not a prodigy
You’re a sloth you disgust me
They’ve got you in shackles the key is
Inches away but are you gonna pull your
Head up long enough to grab it?
The guard’s coming in he’s gonn beat you
Again but you don’t have to take that shit
Boy you’re gonna be better than that
And now that we’re composed let’s
Try to find the rhythm and
Strength to make decisions
Greater my precision and
Build from criticism
Start to pour out my empty heart onto a blank page where words are sure to fail and derail me and now I’m shaking the shackles loose and breaking the bonds that took hold of my body and I’ve got the key it’s more than I thought it would be it’s a part of me The part no one could see
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Matthew W
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« Reply #7 on: September 14, 2008, 08:09:49 PM » |
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Let's keep it short and sweet  Parkour kicks ass And helps build muscle mass |
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