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« on: January 28, 2007, 10:36:47 AM »

This is my parkour essay thing i spent 5 hours writing for final report in media class. Of course we gotta give this oral and that sucks alot. But o well. I just thought i'd share it with the good people of APK and see if i did horrible or well in the eyes of traceurs. so there it is!


PARKOUR
expression of freedom, through motion and movement
by Van VH

WHAT IS PARKOUR/FREE RUNNING/
   What is parkour. To understand parkour you have to know whats not parkour. Parkour is the art of moving through your environment as fast and efficient as possible using your body. This will include using such "moves" as vaults, climbing, running, jumping, and if its the most suitable method for the situation, crawling. Parkour can be seen as a race, a race through your environment. It can also be used for evasion from a pursuer, or if you need to get to a location as fast as possible. The idea is to move with an undisrupted motion and momentum. Never having to turn around, or go around an object causing a loss in time.

   So now you have the idea of what parkour is, what isn't parkour? Well if you know what parkour is, then you should know what isn't parkour. Anything that disrupts your motion of movement. Anything that will slow you down, such as flips, spins and other aerobatic moves. Anything that seems pointless or reckless. This is commonly known as free running. Free running can be titled, *the cousin* of parkour. While parkour is about following a path to move through the environment as fast and efficient as possible, Free running is more about self expression. Following your own path and flaring out your movement with flips and spins.

PARKOUR'S ORIGIN
   To look at parkour's origin, you have to look at a French solder, who served in the Vietnam war. He and his comrades worked to develop an efficient method to pass obstacles in case of a reach, or escape situation. His name is Raymond Belle and he passed this training down to his son David Belle who then began to spend much of his life training it as parkour. Along with him were some friend who helped parkour in the early stages. The most commonly known would probably be Sebastien Foucan.
   David and his crew grew up in lisses, France and was probably the very first parkour team created. There team was called Yamakasi. The word Yamakasi comes from the language of Lingala which is spoken in the two Congo's. Ya Makasi can mean strong body, strong spirit or strong person. Though in French usage its closer to high energy.

PARKOURS PHILOSOPHY
   Lots of traceurs take there training and principle they obtain through parkour and apply it to there everyday lives. By challenging themselves it becomes easier to deal with life situation. Parkour is about over coming obstacles no matter how big. Life is full of obstacles that need to be overcome. By using parkour as not only as a discipline but a way of life, you earn a key to better living.

PARKOUR PRACTITIONERS/TRACEURS
   So, what do you call these parkour practitioners. Simple, there known as traceurs for males and traceues for females. All though traceurs is the more dominant word for both sexes.

PARKOUR, THE BENEFITS, THE LONG RUN, THE RISKS
   Although no one has really been involved in parkour long enough to feel any dis comfort in the long run for practicing parkour, the benefits can go either way. The good benefits, come in both physical and mental strength. Of course one who trains in parkour will be physically fit due to the hardship of the training. There perception over there environment changes. Objects will be seen differently, and the mind of a traceur will never be the same.
   Better health, a stronger body, and stronger mind are the ideal benefits behind parkour. But remember, that along with any kind of sport or art, if not taken seriously, parkour can quickly become very dangerous. Resulting in severe injury and even death. Parkour is a very risky sport/art. But traceurs will say its more of a calculated risk. Yes the "moves" are risky, but with the proper training and mind set, the risks will be lowered dramatically. With that is another question of the joints or knees. The constant landing and jumping puts strain on the joints and knees of the body. The body wasn't developed to take such impact repeatedly. So there are technique traceurs do to help get rid of some of the shock resulting in getting rid of the strain that may damage the joints, muscles, and other body parts.

THE VAULTS, THE JUMPS, THE LANDINGS AND ROLLS
   Vaulting, climbing, jumping, landing and rolling are all involved while one moves through there environment as fast and efficient as possible. The very first and most important of them all to learn would be the basic landing, and rolling. After would be the more complex of movement such as specific vaults.

1. the basic landing-   
The basic landing is designed to "slap" or transfer the shock from the knees and joints to other parts of the body. It is used at any time, anywhere a roll is not needed. This may increase in hight as the body gets stronger and the traceur becomes more advanced. The landing can be seen as a few simple steps. 1. During the dismount off of the object bring the knees up to the chest. This will provide a much smoother technique and motion control. 2. Spot and keep eye contact on landing the entire time. 3. While nearing the ground reach your feet to the landing site. Remember to keep your toes pointed down and prepare to land on the balls of your toes. This helps in body control. 4. Once your toes engage bend your knees, then your hips slightly. Upon impact and during this whole motion slap the ground with your hands in the middle of your legs. This will help transfer shock. The final position will have you resting on the balls of your toes, knee's pointed out, hands in the middle of the legs touching the ground. To help get rid of even more shock and potential strain. Explode into a run after landing.

2. the basic roll-         
The roll is used when jumping off an object has forward momentum (running and jumping off an object). This technique is used to re-direct the shock safely. The roll can take months to feel comfortable with. And should not be practiced on concrete until one feels comfortable in there technique. The roll can be broken down in several steps. 1. jump off the object while running forward. Use the basic landing technique (knees against chest, spot the landing site, upon landing point toes down and reach for the ground) 2. upon impact bend the knees but this time use your legs to push forward while placing your hands on one side of your head on the ground. 3. Now, tuck the side of your shoulder were your hands are in. Use your legs to power your body forward at a diagonal motion. A good rule to remember is to roll from right shoulder to left hip, or vice versa. 4. Now the final motion. Upon the roll, come out on your feet use your hands to push your body up, and explode into a run.

Those are the most important things a traceur will learn. Upon them are many other variation of vaults.

1. The monkey
2. The king kong
3. The lazy boy
4. The kash
5. The turn vault
6. The dash vault
7. The cat leap
8. The speed vault
9. The underbar
10. The precision jump
11. The cat walk
12. The tic tac
13. The wall run
14 The pop vault
15. The gap jump

These are the main motion of movement. They can be modified, and if used correctly are very effective in running through your environment efficiently. For tutorials of all the "moves" you can visit www.urbanfreeflow.com or www.americanparkour.com or www.texasparkour.com
   These techniques will take months and even years to perfect. But in the long run is well worth it. Not only are they effective but they look smooth and somewhat impressive.

THE TRAINING AND ITS EFFECTS ON THE BODY AND MIND
   So, were do traceurs train exactly and how do they train? Most traceurs train in urban environments, using man made obstacles such as buildings, walls, rails, and other street objects. But its good to also train in what mother nature has to offer. This will help strengthen the mind and body of the traceur.
   Traceurs may train anywhere between 2 to 6 hours a day or more, and up to 2 to 6 days a week. More serious traceurs train between the 6 hours and 6 days a week area. Traceurs train there technique. There mind to over come hight fear and other various fears. Training doesn't only consist of training technique. It involves strength training and stretching. Sometimes meditations. Traceurs may climb the highest building or object they can and just sit on top of it. Looking down on there environment. This may be a kind of meditation training. Traceurs train from bottom up. They start small. From jumps of only a couple of feet, then slowly as they increase in skill, they move up. Its important to train at your own pace and never rush into anything. If you don't feel you can do it. Don't do it!
   Remember that just because you not out running or specifically training parkour you can't train at all. There are hundreds of strength trainings and stretching s. These are very important in the overall performance of a traceur. Eating and eating right is another thing that can effect a traceur for better or for worse. By eating right and healthy, you can increase your energy usage and capacity. Helps keep muscles at there max. Focus is stronger and much more. The right food can do allot to the body and mind. And a good body means a better traceur.
   Running is one of the most neglected training method. Running is a huge part in parkour. By jogging everyday a traceur increases there overall stamina, leg strength, and is one of the best cardio workouts you can do.
   Act like a animal. Go ahead. so what. you'll look like an idiot. But acting like a monkey can be very good training. Just hang around, climb things at a local park. Walk on all fours. Just have fun with it.
   Balance is the key to muscle control. Practice your balance as much as possible. You can do this by rail walking, cat walking, and anything to were you can just go slow and control your body movement. Increased balance means better movement and technique. Better awareness and a stronger mind.

FEAR AND PROGRESSION
   One of the biggest things a traceur will deal with is fear. The fear of not completing a "move" and getting injured. Fear is all in the mind. The traceur must figure out why they are afraid and then once that is done. Figure out how to progress through the fear. One of the biggest rules in parkour is to not do something you don't feel 100 percent with. When performing something with even the slightest fear or hesitation, its a cause for disaster. Take your time, and in time you will grow stronger.

PARKOUR AND JOHNY LAW
   It's inevitable when training parkour. It will happen and its good to be prepared for it. Yes as a traceur practicing parkour in public places on public property. You will be stopped by the law. And when this happens it is very important to know how to explain and deal with the situation. Yes talking to the cops can be nerve racking. But if handled properly can be a great way to spread the word of parkour. Here it goes, your training and a cop stops you. One of the first things there going to ask you is what are you doing. While answering this question its important on what you say. Don't go saying, "im doing parkour, a sport created in France by a man named David belle"....... The cops or who ever will only get more confused and thus not pay attention to you. Say something more like, "were practicing a sport called parkour/free running" use both most cops wont' know what parkour is, by using free running they may understand it easier. If the cop asks what parkour or free running is, tell them simply, its like an urban obstacle course. Keep it plain and simple. Just be sure to let the cop know your not vandalizing. This is most of there concerns. Don't get to detailed. Only get detailed if the cop seems interested and wants to know more. Usually 99 percent of the time all they do is take a name check and then tell you you can't do this here please move on. Then simply move on. Don't argue or anything. A really good way is to get owner consent that allows you to train on there property. All though this is difficult to get it can be obtained. The NUMBER ONE RULE!! NEVER RUN WHEN A COP STOPS YOU!!!


PARKOUR, HAVE FUN, LEARN, TRAIN, GROW AND USE IT IN YOUR LIFE
   Parkour is a discipline that at first hurts, you'll bleed, you'll ache, you'll sweat. But its important never to give up. And don't forget to have fun with it. Learn from it. Pay attention and watch your self grow. Apply it to your life. Parkour is on the growth and is spreading every day. Anyone can do it, all you need is some good shoes, and some good trainers. Make friends. And remember to just flow......

I'd like to thank www.americanparkour.com www.urbanfreeflow.com and www. texasparkour.com for informationiin this report.
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« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2007, 02:38:48 PM »

I think the essay is pretty thorough.  Its a very good effort, and you've obviously invested alot of time in it.
  Is it a rough draft or a final copy?  From an writing standpoint, there are alot of editorial corrections that need to be made, but nothing that your English teacher can't help you with when you turn it in. 
   There are some things you may want to look at that could improve it from an English standpoint.
      -Reread it, looking for incomplete sentences.  There are alot.  You frequently use a period where a comma or semicolan would have worked.  Or, better yet, you can keep the sentences broken up, but make sure each sentence has its own noun and verb. 
     - You shouldn't use quotation marks in an English paper unless you are directly quoting something. For example, saying parkour includes such "moves" as vaults, jumps, etc.  doesn't make sense to an unformed reader.  Lose the quotations, and consider using the term movements instead of moves-- I think its more accurate.  Also using asteriscs as quotation marks is not proper writing- "freerunning can be titled *the cousin* of parkour".  I'd suggest dropping them.
     -  The layout you've chosen may not be accepted by your teacher, depending on the assignment.  The format of breaking the piece into related paragraphs and titling each section (i.e. "what is parkour/freerunning", "parkour's philosophy", "fear and progression", etc.), works for an article or a how-to piece, but generally does not for an essay.  Again, I don't know the exact assignment, so its definately your call. 
   I think the content is pretty good.  I'll let everyone else critique that.  But i'm pretty good with writing, so I thought i'd offer my opinion in regards to that department.
   Good job overall!  Put a bit more work in it, and I think it could definately go from  B-  to A+   material!   
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« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2007, 05:01:55 PM »

I think your basic landing discription needs to be revised.
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« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2007, 05:37:59 PM »

I think your basic landing discription needs to be revised.

really?? why's that. I got the info from americanparkour. Not word for word but i made sure i didn't get it wrong? what i do wrong.
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« Reply #4 on: January 28, 2007, 05:57:11 PM »

I think your basic landing discription needs to be revised.

really?? why's that. I got the info from americanparkour. Not word for word but i made sure i didn't get it wrong? what i do wrong.

well if you think to slap between your legs and transfer energy effectively its dam near impossible, you need to slap in front of your legs, not way out there, but in front, heres the pic tutorial here on APK http://www.americanparkour.com/gallery2/v/member/crossfit/jumps/drop4.jpg.html
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« Reply #5 on: January 28, 2007, 06:11:01 PM »

the whole ground slapping thing is not right. It was created by bam from uff and does not absorb shock effectivly.
I dont see anything about slapping the ground on apk...
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« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2007, 06:19:13 PM »

Yea i slap ahead of me not in between my legs but while digging for "correct info i came upon that and thought I was doing it wrong the whole time. So im doing right?

thanks guys. i'll fix that.

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« Reply #7 on: January 28, 2007, 06:44:07 PM »

Yeah, ground slapping doesn't do much. Your arms take a very small part of the impact in the landing, but they're more for creating an efficient position from which to  bound into a sprint. I also noticed (after skimming the article, I'll try to find time to read it more thoroughly tomorrow) that you call the lazy vault (I'm assuming) the "lazy boy"...I do agree that a good reclining chair is important for the downtime of any dedicated traceur, but I wouldn't go so far as to consider it a technique Wink
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« Reply #8 on: January 28, 2007, 06:49:15 PM »

Gear! you never used the lazy boy. I use it all the time. When i see rails i run up and pull a lazy boy recliner out of my pocket while vaulting the rail.

Very efficient if you got a bag of chips with you to  Grin Grin

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« Reply #9 on: January 28, 2007, 07:18:56 PM »

you start of with, "...To understand parkour you have to know whats not parkour. " and then you tell them what parkour IS when you make it sound like you are about to tell them what it is not.  You should probably flip your first two paragraphs, or remove that sentence
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« Reply #10 on: January 28, 2007, 07:26:53 PM »

i know dude, i just realized that lol.  but how bout some kudo's for the essay now. lol u guys keep telling me things i did wrong and now im just like, eh, maybe i spent 5 hours on this and its all wrong and ugly. lol don't get me wrong criticism is welcome, but i like kudo's better!!!  Grin Grin Grin
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« Reply #11 on: January 28, 2007, 09:56:31 PM »

the whole ground slapping thing is not right. It was created by bam from uff and does not absorb shock effectivly.
I dont see anything about slapping the ground on apk...

well clearly it says in the caption that you place your hands on the ground to dissapate the force.

i agree that slapping isn't effective  but if you're not experienced on rolling on concrete its the "next best thing"
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« Reply #12 on: January 28, 2007, 10:39:12 PM »

However, taking criticism to thought is one way to improve your writing.  With that being said, I would like to note that there are many generalizations and bias' in this report, which to me subtracts from its good potential content.

For example, the need for proper research:
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PARKOUR, THE BENEFITS, THE LONG RUN, THE RISKS
   Although no one has really been involved in parkour long enough to feel any dis comfort in the long run for practicing parkour, the benefits can go either way. The good benefits, come in both physical and mental strength. Of course one who trains in parkour will be physically fit due to the hardship of the training. There perception over there environment changes. Objects will be seen differently, and the mind of a traceur will never be the same.
   Better health, a stronger body, and stronger mind are the ideal benefits behind parkour. But remember, that along with any kind of sport or art, if not taken seriously, parkour can quickly become very dangerous. Resulting in severe injury and even death. Parkour is a very risky sport/art. But traceurs will say its more of a calculated risk. Yes the "moves" are risky, but with the proper training and mind set, the risks will be lowered dramatically. With that is another question of the joints or knees. The constant landing and jumping puts strain on the joints and knees of the body. The body wasn't developed to take such impact repeatedly. So there are technique traceurs do to help get rid of some of the shock resulting in getting rid of the strain that may damage the joints, muscles, and other body parts.

There are articles over on parkour.net, of how many of the yamakazi guys are now having deep knee problems- so there is obviously someone  Any way you put it, heavy constant shock on your joints will eventually catch up to you, no matter what.  I think you should probably instead just talk about building up to parkour-perhaps do some research on method naturalle, and talk about that.


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PARKOUR AND JOHNY LAW
   It's inevitable when training parkour. It will happen and its good to be prepared for it. Yes as a traceur practicing parkour in public places on public property. You will be stopped by the law. And when this happens it is very important to know how to explain and deal with the situation. Yes talking to the cops can be nerve racking. But if handled properly can be a great way to spread the word of parkour. Here it goes, your training and a cop stops you. One of the first things there going to ask you is what are you doing. While answering this question its important on what you say. Don't go saying, "im doing parkour, a sport created in France by a man named David belle"....... The cops or who ever will only get more confused and thus not pay attention to you. Say something more like, "were practicing a sport called parkour/free running" use both most cops wont' know what parkour is, by using free running they may understand it easier. If the cop asks what parkour or free running is, tell them simply, its like an urban obstacle course. Keep it plain and simple. Just be sure to let the cop know your not vandalizing. This is most of there concerns. Don't get to detailed. Only get detailed if the cop seems interested and wants to know more. Usually 99 percent of the time all they do is take a name check and then tell you you can't do this here please move on. Then simply move on. Don't argue or anything. A really good way is to get owner consent that allows you to train on there property. All though this is difficult to get it can be obtained. The NUMBER ONE RULE!! NEVER RUN WHEN A COP STOPS YOU!!!

This is not only a bad paragraph, because your just telling a reader how to deal with police, but it is a bias on tracuers in general.  Granted, I'm not saying that we should actually go out and cause trouble; evade law enforcement; and jump off roofs, but some people are not all like that.  Some people will run, and it is not part of parkour to tell them how to live.  Parkour may be a 'way of life' to some people, but they do not have to act on some code of behavior to practice parkour- otherwise it would be an elitist sport. It would be like saying that you have to be rich to play polo.  Yes obviously, someone rude representing parkour will not help our situation any better, but you can't tell people how to act because they're practicing parkour.
 
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« Reply #13 on: January 28, 2007, 11:20:44 PM »

JOMR, about the cop section i saw it two ways, you either knew what to do in which case my info didn't matter then, or you didn't and my info some what helped. Around my area alot of traceurs who get stopped didn't know what to do when they were stopped by a cop so i through that in there.



but from all the posts im figuring my 5 hour essay thing i wrote is bad.....damn it. this kills a whole lot of things. I'll rewrite one when i can.  Angry Angry Angry
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« Reply #14 on: January 28, 2007, 11:32:13 PM »

JOMR, about the cop section i saw it two ways, you either knew what to do in which case my info didn't matter then, or you didn't and my info some what helped. Around my area alot of traceurs who get stopped didn't know what to do when they were stopped by a cop so i through that in there.



but from all the posts im figuring my 5 hour essay thing i wrote is bad.....damn it. this kills a whole lot of things. I'll rewrite one when i can.  Angry Angry Angry

all in all it's not a bad paper, you got a lot of things decently, there are just a few paragraphs you need to make revisions to.
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