Clint "Striker" Walker
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« on: November 07, 2008, 11:38:45 PM » |
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I'm writing a song about PK. So far, it goes like this
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To Be and To Last
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I am trapped in this hell
The world is closing in
Nothing but a concrete prison cell
Tearing my ambitions for no sin
I can not live with this doubt
Only one escape remains
Time for me to get out
Only my contiance restrains
To be and to last
I was born for survival
To be and to last
I have no rival
To be and to last
Run from this doubt
To be and to last
Find my way out
I will live to see the day
Walls will not be built to restrain
I will make my way
Through the sun and through the rain
The traceur that I am
Will guide me through the years
Forge a road of optomisem
Brake from this trail of tears
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My Music"Keep your eyes focused on your goal rather then the obstacle in your path." In other words, don't let the pan distract you from the pie. I like pie.
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« Reply #1 on: November 08, 2008, 12:29:24 AM » |
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Looking good. Keep it going. Good luck.
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« Reply #2 on: November 08, 2008, 07:48:37 AM » |
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Looking good, and I am looking forward to hearing it. Good job so far.
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« Reply #3 on: November 08, 2008, 06:59:54 PM » |
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what kind of music u putting it too. looks good so far
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« Reply #5 on: November 12, 2008, 02:32:00 AM » |
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what kind of music u putting it too. looks good so far
Depends on what I come up with for the main rhythm guitar riff. I'm aiming for something close to Five Finger Death Punch. |
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My Music"Keep your eyes focused on your goal rather then the obstacle in your path." In other words, don't let the pan distract you from the pie. I like pie.
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« Reply #6 on: November 12, 2008, 09:17:05 PM » |
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I could hear something along the lines of Rev Theory's "Hell Yeah" or Metallica's "Whiskey in the Jar".
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« Reply #7 on: November 14, 2008, 05:48:49 PM » |
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I'm actually starting to lean toward something more of a Metallica style ballad now that I've come up with a beautiful intro.
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My Music"Keep your eyes focused on your goal rather then the obstacle in your path." In other words, don't let the pan distract you from the pie. I like pie.
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« Reply #8 on: November 28, 2008, 05:45:12 AM » |
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that was great cant wait to hear it!  |
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« Reply #9 on: November 29, 2008, 02:28:43 PM » |
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My Music"Keep your eyes focused on your goal rather then the obstacle in your path." In other words, don't let the pan distract you from the pie. I like pie.
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« Reply #10 on: November 29, 2008, 04:35:21 PM » |
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Meh. You're a nice guitar player, but the vocals... As for the tune, I am now seeing it to be something linking park/fort minor, but that's not my decision lol. But yea, maybe a new vocalist? Guitar was great though, sounds like early metallica. |
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« Reply #11 on: December 01, 2008, 03:03:21 PM » |
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Vocals do sound like crap, not quite use to singing and playing guitar at the same time. Next time I record, vocals will be done separately. Still needs a bridge and a final verse.
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My Music"Keep your eyes focused on your goal rather then the obstacle in your path." In other words, don't let the pan distract you from the pie. I like pie.
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« Reply #12 on: December 02, 2008, 06:11:13 AM » |
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sounds great but the vocals...
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